I can see where writing such a detail-heavy story could be a nightmare for the author - so many different characters and storylines and problems with continuity - but, you did it. It was flawless and I enjoyed every minute of the 104 thousand words it had. (is that right?) I haven't mentioned before that I really liked the direct quotes from the show that started each chapter. That was a great touch.
The ending, though, was a little bittersweet; David being stood up and Don and Liz breaking up, while it is totally obvious that both Colby and Charlie were definitly going to get lucky. Ha Ha
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Date: 2010-07-25 07:07 (UTC)The ending, though, was a little bittersweet; David being stood up and Don and Liz breaking up, while it is totally obvious that both Colby and Charlie were definitly going to get lucky. Ha Ha
Thanks again for a wonderful story.